Wednesday, October 8, 2014

This I Believe Draft- If I Can, You Can

            When difficult issues occur in life, some people will just give up in the process or not even try to solve the problem; others will try hard to get through the difficulty. I faced a major problem when I first come to the United States, but I choose to work hard and try my best to overcome the obstacle. At the age of ten, my family immigrated to the America. Being a child born in China, moving to the other side of the world was like starting a new life because everything is different. I had to adapt to the culture, living style, and the environment, however, the biggest problem I have is speaking English. I have been speaking Chinese even since I was born, and never learned English; so I had to learn a whole new language that has nothing in common with Chinese at all, which is very hard.

            In my first year of school in the U.S., English is a major issue for me. I cannot understand stand anything that’s taught in class and I didn't know how to do any of the homework just because I didn't know any English. For this reason, I was the only student in my class that’s allowed to openly copy answers from other classmates. The only subject I was confident in was math because it didn't require much English. Due to my situation, I was put into ESOL for two years; I start from learning the basic rules and structures of English, then move onto harder English skills as I go longer in ESOL. After a year of ESOL, I was able to adapt to the living style and the educational system of U.S., but I still had to work on more elevated English and the fluency of it, so I practice and practice as I’m in the program. After my second year of ESOL, I was able to speak fluent English, so I graduated from the program and was able to take the same classes as everyone else. Taking two years to learn a language fluently could seem long or short, but I put in a lot of work and practiced a lot to come to where I am now, so I believe that there’s nothing you cannot overcome as long as you work hard and try your best.

Belief: I believe that working hard and trying the best can help one achieve his or her goal and overcome obstacles in life.

Word Count: 390

1 comment:

  1. You did well explaining your belief both in the middle of the blog as well as clearly in the believe statement. overall a good paper but if i were to suggest something it would be to incorporate some sort of an example of how easy or different life and school was before moving to america in addition to after.

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